Friday, September 30, 2016

September Short Story: Dust

In an effort to produce more writing, I'll be posting some short stories that I work on in between novels. September's story is "Dust," a short story about a student who studies magical terraforming--and of his final exam in a howling dust storm.




 DUST by Hanna Day

 


The dust was everywhere. It swirled around Joel in howling eddies, so thick he thought he would choke upon the air. He ran his tongue along his teeth and tasted grit; he wondered if he would ever be rid of the taste.
            Joel crawled forward on his belly, the dust stinging his eyes and blowing through his clothes. He opened his eyes blearily, and then shut them again as another gust of wind blew dust into them.
            The storm had taken him by surprise, like the stories always said they would. The black-and-white textbook photographs couldn’t possibly portray the majestic storm clouds or their sudden, violent fury.
            He cried out wordlessly, unable to call upon the ancient magic to save his dehydrated body. There was no water for him to draw upon. If the dust didn’t choke him to death, then the sun would sap away any life remaining in him and shrivel him up until he was nothing but bones.
            Joel pushed himself to his elbows, though the force of the wind threatened to push him back down.
            Why did he ever think he could do this? Dust particles threatened to blow away his clothes, his flesh, even his bones away. He stopped crawling, intending to become part of the land. He curled into a tight ball and clamped his hands over his ears to block out the wind.
The dust bit into him and tore his clothes apart like the serrated teeth of a mythological monster, but he did not care. He had failed; he deserved to be torn apart by the wind. Perhaps if he did not move the dust would eat him away in minutes, and his pain would end.
            Joel started as someone placed a hand on his shoulder. “You lost, boy? Or are you looking for someone?”
            The woman’s voice came from above him, muted as the wind rattled his ear drums. Joel almost didn’t hear her, since her thick accent rasped against his ears. He opened his mouth to reply, but coughed as dust poured into it.
            “I see,” the woman said. “Come inside for a little while. I’ll get you something to drink.”
            The woman bent down and pulled Joel to his feet. Joel took off his neckerchief and coughed again. An old woman stood before him, wearing goggles coated with red dust and a handkerchief over her mouth. She carried a lumpy green sack on her back, the contents rattling with every move she made.
            “Where are we going?” Joel asked, his voice a croak.
            “I was on my way home, picking up trash.”
            Together they walked slowly against the wind, heads bowed and collars upturned to protect their fragile necks. He kept his hands on her bony shoulders to orient himself, too weary to care that she spoke softly to him as they walked, as if to a weary child. He looked at nothing but the hot, dry, cracked earth beneath his dragging feet.
            Seconds stretched into minutes. Since walking into the dust bowl Joel had lost all notion of time. His pocket-watch had stopped working sometime after he left the first checkpoint. His chapped lips began to bleed. Licking the dust from his lips only made him thirstier.  
            “We’re here, boy,” the woman said, taking his hand gently off her shoulder. “You’re safe for now.”
            The woman placed his hand on a wooden door. He could feel the roughly splintered wood on his callused hand, and he wondered if the weak wood would crumble with a single push.
            “Dazed by the heat, I see,” the woman said, pushing his hand out of the way to reach for the doorknob. “Most folks who are trapped in the storms are. Come on.”
            She pulled the door open, and darkness greeted them. Joel stood there, afraid. What was this place? The woman muttered something incomprehensible in her native tongue before shoving him inside.
            The woman dropped her sack onto the wooden floor and slammed the door shut behind him, causing the floorboards to rattle. Every window that had been there was boarded up tight to block out the wind. The woman lit an oil lamp, which shed light upon a cramped kitchen. Snakes seemed to slither through the walls as the wind found its way through the cracks.
            “Sit down, boy.”
            Despite himself, he obeyed. He wiped the thick reddish dust that coated his skin with a towel and shook his hair clean. He frowned at the mess on the floor, though the woman didn’t seem to mind. Now that he was safely inside and away from the storm he saw the woman taking note of his worn uniform. Joel wore a long-sleeved uniform of deep navy blue, the white stripes running along his sleeves marked him as a Rainmaker student from the royal province. It was no longer pressed and pristine, but now stained an ugly shade of reddish-brown. Pity. His teachers would reprimand him for failing to keep the suit clean. After all, it didn’t truly belong to him.  
The woman went to the kitchen counter and got water for him through a rusty pump, an archaic thing that churned out water deep within the ground. He watched in silence as it spluttered out dirty water into a bowl.
“I’ve seen young people like you before around here,” the old woman said. She took out a filter, set it over another bowl, and then poured the tainted water through it. “You waterlogged students don’t know how to deal with the dust. Where are you from, boy?”
“A land of rain and thunder,” he replied, unsure if she knew the city’s true name, which was in a different tongue. His native tongue.  
“A faraway land, then.” She poured Joel a glass of water, which he took gratefully. “A fisherman’s boy?”
He sipped the water and grimaced. There was a bitter taste to the water here, as though it would never be clean.
“Yes,” Joel replied, surprised. “How can you tell?”
“I’ve done of bit of traveling myself, when I was a younger woman, of course. Your dusky complexion and accent betray you. But I can also tell that you’re not partial to the dust, and you never will be. Children of Water never acclimate.”
“We don’t acclimate. We force the land to acclimate to us.”
Her pale eyes flashed in amusement. “How did you end up here?”
“I came here for a test.”
His teacher had sent him and his classmates out to the dust bowl. Traveling into the heart of a dust storm and performing one last final test amid the dust would demonstrate if he had mastered the art of extracting water from the earth.
“Ah, I see,” the woman replied. “Do you think you passed?”
Joel looked at his hands, dust embedded in the fleshy creases of his hands. “I don’t know.”
            The Rainmakers prided themselves on their ability to control water from the natural world. It had become a science only the most dedicated students could study, as talent alone was not enough to become a great Rainmaker.  
            The walls trembled as another gust of wind rocked the house. The oil lamps flickered. The pots and pans hanging from hooks on the ceiling rocked gently. Joel looked up, his hands shaking as he imagined the walls coming down upon him.
            “It’s like the end of the world,” Joel said.
            “I’ve lived with these storms all my life,” the woman said. “I can’t live without them.”
            Joel certainly could. He would take a hurricane—such as the ones that plagued his home shores—any day over dust storms. They were predictable and folks could prepare for an oncoming storm, while the dust storm jerked folks into death without much warning.
            “So,” the woman said, throwing Joel a bag of dry jerky. “You’re a student of Water come to change the nature of the dust storms.”
            He caught the jerky and set it on the table. “Yes, though I failed.”
            Joel closed his eyes and tried to imagine water all around him, just as he had been taught seven years ago. Rainmaking, an ancient magic practiced throughout the colonial empire, originated from the northern province. Potential students, who were recruited from all provinces whether they wanted to or not, went to the Oasis to be baptized in the True Water. True Water bubbled from a trickling fountain residing in the Jungle Oasis, where special priests baptized potential students with True Water. Not drinking water, or rainwater or water from the salty sea, but Water in its purest form, untainted by the natural world and bubbling up from deep beneath the earth. True Water that allowed a student to understand water in its many forms so that he or she could learn to control it. The baptism was a simple ceremony, one that Joel remembered well. For the moment the priest dipped him into the deep water a refreshing coolness came over him, one that swept through every atom of his body. All at once he had felt at home in the water and understood the element as he never had before, and so had discovered his affinity for the curious magic.    
            Those who grew up in the watery provinces, such as Joel, tended to possess more affinity for the ancient magic. They could call upon the water in the air, in the plants, in the clouds, even the water within the human body. With some practice exceptional students like Joel could breathe underwater. Rainmakers were primarily employed by the government and dispatched to agricultural areas suffering from drought, or brought in to stop floods or to erect dams.
            Joel reached into his pocket and took out a single seed. The test was simple: go out into the dusty storm and coax the seed into a flower by the next morning. He had tried so many hours ago to draw water from deep within the ground, to draw water from the insects and animals that passed by, and even draw from the water within himself to feed the seed. But then the dust storm forced him to stop and blew him away far into the dust bowl, too far away to call for help and just far enough for him to get lost.
            “Is it that important?” the old woman asked. “So what if you can’t work for the emperor as a licensed Rainmaker?”
            “If I fail, then I can never go the Royal City. I’ll be a fisherman again.”
            “Is there anything wrong with that?”
            Joel said nothing. Seven years of his life wasted—and for what? To fail his final exam and be sent back home? Joel wasn’t certain if he could help his parents anymore; he no longer had the muscles of a fisherman, but the mind of a Rainmaker scholar. He was no longer useful to anyone anymore.
            The old woman poured herself a glass of whiskey. “You’re not the first student I’ve found during a dust storm and you won’t be the last. The Rainmakers always send their young students into dust storms for their final exams.”
            “They do?”
            She simply looked at him. “How many of your classmates returned last year?”
            “Only a hundred out of a class of three hundred and twenty.”
            The statistics suddenly seemed absurd. Joel looked at the bag on the floor, and kicked at it. Bones—bleached white from the sun—clattered onto the floor.
            “Don’t worry, I didn’t kill them,” the woman said. “I found those students yesterday. I collect their bones, you see. It’s been my job for nearly four decades. I return them to the university’s clerk, who then passes them back to the families, and then I am paid for my troubles.”
            He felt nauseous. Were these his friends? Elihu, whom he joked with just yesterday? Or perhaps Joanna, the woman he had dinner with just last Saturday? He gazed at the bones, trying to remember facts from his anatomy class. Maybe his friends hadn’t died. Maybe they were still out there and managed to find water to make their flowers grow.
“Why would they let us die?” Joel asked, his voice cracking.
            “I don’t know. That’s something you’ll have to figure out for yourself.”
            “But I’m alive,” Joel said, looking down at his hands. “Shouldn’t that count for something?”
            “Be careful, boy. I’ve met your kind before, and the dust changed them. It has changed you as well, even if you don’t realize it yet. So you were baptized with Water, now you are baptized with Dust. Water brings life, yet in the end we all turn to dust.”
            She spoke like an old prophet from the Holy Hymns. Perhaps if Joel had paid attention in theology, then he would have recognized which old prophet she was referring to. The wind outside moaned again, though this time he shook with terror over the bones of his classmates lying on the floor.
            Joel looked at the water pump and attempted to draw the water out of the pipe. He breathed in slowly and closed his eyes, trying to listen for the water flowing through the pipes. Tried to imagine the coolness of it upon his skin and the relief it would bring to his parched throat. But after a long minute, nothing happened. He opened his eyes, a growing terror that he had lost his ability to call upon water rising to a crescendo.
            “Well, I’m certain you don’t want to stay here,” the woman said. “Let me refill your water bottle, and you can be on your way.”
            He looked strangely at the woman, as though seeing her for first time. His mind reeled from shock, and he stumbled over his words. “I suppose… I suppose I should go.”
            The woman went back to the water pump, and as she filled his water bottle Joel allowed his mind to wander. Students who failed their final exam would be shipped back to their home province in disgrace. Either they came back from the dust storm or not at all. Would it be better to stay here, in this acrid land?
            “Here you go, boy,” the woman said, handing him his water bottle. “Take that jerky and this map as well. I have no more need for them.”
            His chair creaked as he stood up. He brushed back his dark hair from his eyes and looked apprehensively at the door. “I don’t know where to go.”   
            “I can’t help you.” The woman paused to listen the wind. “The storm will end soon. You can start your life anew by leaving my home. I have work to do, and you’ll only get in my way. Perhaps find out if your friends have died.”
            Joel sighed. He wished that someone would tell him what to do, that someone would reassure him that he hadn’t lost his ability to call upon water, but he had to face reality sometime. Joel was a practical young man. Dwelling on the nonexistent would not keep him alive; his attention would be better spent on practical tasks.
            “I should do that, shouldn’t I?” Joel grimaced. “I’m sorry. You don’t care. You benefit from the bones.”
            “Whoever said that I didn’t care?” the woman asked. “You never asked how I feel about picking up the bones of talented young folk. It is disheartening. Maybe you’ll find a better way to test students.”
            Perhaps he would.
            “Thank you for your kindness,” Joel said. “I’ll be on my way now.”
            Joel braced himself for the wind before opening the door. The dust was settling down, and the wide dust bowl was once again bathed in sunlight. He could not tell how long it had been since he entered the dust bowl. Time passed differently during the storms. A day, maybe two, or perhaps a week had gone by without his knowledge. Or maybe he had, as he initially believed, only been out on his own for a few hours. Who knew?
            The locals say the dust scours everything clean. Perhaps it had even blown away any magical ability Joel had left. He wanted to believe that the dust somehow blew away his talent. He didn’t want to believe that he was not exceptional enough, that his own talent had failed him and left him to die. Joel slung his water bottle over his shoulder and walked out into the dying storm.

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